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For Firnsew

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hidden should i stay
a modern comfort for a day
to let others believe
that no pain u recieve
u hide ur tears
and u confide in ur fears
u reveal a shadow
and reflect within the window
but hide ur stray
and let urself be at bay
to allow difference is not allowed
in society that is too damn proud
to ignore this pain is agony
to take the pain is customary
by knife, it makes ppl sad
but agony makes me mad
and frustration can't be controlled
ur feelings can't be sold
to make others understand
only unless they land
the same as u
I know how you feel Firnsew and most don't understand..i wrote this poem for you in corresspondance of urs [link]
don't get too down and don't feel to hurt but also don't forget you'll always have a friend when needed!
i know its not great but thast what went through my head like butter melting when i read ur poem!
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neddiedrow's avatar
Very well done! I like it!